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JannaQ |
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Oooh--I love fan fiction! Great writers on this board!
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GiNANiC0LE |
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I absolutely love the story so far! |
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Sophz456 |
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Thanks everyone
Bluebell, I actually never thought of making Cecilia be the one to look after Robbie! I always imagined that they would meet somewhere else. You'll see what I mean when I post that section.
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Sophz456 |
Part Two: | #24 | ||
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Coming Home:
"Cee?" Robbie reached out to touch her but she was too far away. "Darling, I
don't have much time. I have to get back to the hospital in half an hour." She sat beside him and touched his face. He felt her cool fingertips
across his skin. "I love you. I'll wait for you. Come back. Come back to me." Robbie shut his eyes.
"Nettle… What will you do when we get back?" Robbie asked. "I'm not sure, I'll probably end up going home." Nettle paused at the word 'home' and he and Robbie both looked down. Home was so far away, a distant memory. Robbie lifted his head. "Before you go, would you do me a favour please?" He asked. "Of course Guv, what do you want me to do?" "Help me find a way to contact Cecilia. I need to see her" Nettle pondered for a moment, then turned to face Robbie. "On one condition" he replied, smiling. "Anything" Robbie said, his desperation showing. "You get that wound seen to" "I will, I promise" Robbie's eyes lit up as
he looked into Nettle's eyes and thanked him.
had never reached his eyes before. 'Maybe some good may come of this' he thought.
"I'm trying!" "Private Turner… Please! I have to remove the shrapnel from your wound or you stand the chance of getting an infection." "I'm sorry, it's just…" Robbie began. "I know it hurts… I will be as quick as I can." The nurse replied soothingly. She was as nervous as he was, Sister had already scorned her for telling a patient her first name, and knew that if she became too personally involved she'd risk getting into even deeper trouble. "Ok, take a deep breath. On the count of three I'm going to pull." Robbie gritted his teeth, closed his eyes and braced himself. "One… Two… Three!" she said, and pulled on the piece of shrapnel. Robbie groaned loudly as it came clear with one smooth stroke. Breathing deeply, he opened his eyes to look at the inch and a half long piece of steel that had been embedded in his flesh just moments before. "There we go, that wasn't too bad was it?" smiled Eleanor, dropping it into the nearby kidney bowl. "Thank you" "I'm just doing my job, Sir." She replied,
inspecting the wound. "You're going to need some sutures to close up the wound, and I'll place a bandage around your chest. We'll get you out
of here in a jiffy."
"Yes, Nurse Burton?" "I'm sorry Sister, but my hands are shaking. I can't suture this wound… I" The nurse was clearly trying her hardest to remain calm, but the long hours were finally beginning to take its toll. "You've worked hard today Nurse Burton, take a
break. I'll finish up." Cecilia swiftly walked to the bed and took over. Although Cecilia refrained from bonding with the girls, she couldn't help
feeling sorry for them all. Most of them were little over eighteen, had little training, and had no idea of how much they would have to deal with. Nurse Burton
in particular was struggling to cope with the strain of it all. There had been three waves so far, each bringing more and more injured soldiers with them. So
far she had not seen or heard of Robbie being admitted to hospital, but she was unsure if that was a good or bad thing. If he wasn't in hospital where was
he? She knew he was on his way home, but she was unsure if he was injured or not. She could only hope.
"Yes?" Cecilia replied. "Is your name Cecilia Tallis?" "Yes it is. Why do you ask?" Cecilia looked at her and frowned. "I have something for you. It arrived today." She held out a letter and Cecilia took it from her, and recognised the handwriting instantly. "Thank you Nurse Burton." Cecilia tried to hide her excitement. "Don't mention it Sister" replied Nurse Burton and left the room. The moment she was sure Nurse Burton was no longer in the room, she ripped open the envelope, desperate to read the contents of it. Dearest Cecilia,
I hope this letter reaches you well.
Cecilia sat down and smiled. He was alive. She read the letter again and again to make sure she had read it correctly. He was going to write again so they could meet. They were going to meet. Cecilia closed her eyes briefly, and when she opened them she had a smile on her face. He had come back to her. For now, all she could do was wait for his next letter.
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Sophz456 |
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There's part two. I think I've finished it, but I may add some more onto it in the near future, depending on how part three turns out. xx
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Bluebell66 |
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Sophz456 wrote: Oh, it's even more interesting now...I'm curious!
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Sophz456 |
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Thanks Bluebell
Oooooh, please post your fanfic! I'd love to read it (in english) I've got one more bit of part two to add, then I'm onto part 3
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GiNANiC0LE |
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I cannot begin to explain how much I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Sophz456 |
Part Three: | #29 | ||
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Cottage By The Beach:
"Cecilia..." he replied, stunned. He watched her take a few more steps forward then break into a run. He opened his arms to embrace her, and wrapped them around her tightly as he gently lifted her off the ground. They stood for a few minutes, their arms wrapped around each other, neither of them wanting to let go. Robbie pulled back slightly and saw she was crying. He lent forwards and gently kissed each of her closed eyelids, and wiped away her tears with his thumbs. He lent forwards again and kissed her longingly on the lips. She returned the kiss, let out the falling, sighing sound which Robbie remembered from the first time he kissed her in the library. "I love you" Robbie whispered against her lips, tears welling in his eyes. "I love you" She whispered back, a tear rolling
down her cheek.
"Cee, don't cry…" tears began to roll down Robbie's face. "I've missed you... Words cannot even begin to describe how much. I thought… I thought you were…" She sobbed, unable to finish her sentence. Robbie wrapped his arms around her and held her close. "I'm ok Cee, I'm here now,
I've got you, don't cry. Everything is going to be ok." He whispered. "I promise."
Cecilia looked into Robbie's tearful
eyes and kissed him. They pressed their foreheads together gently and closed their eyes. Robbie held Cecilia's hand in his and squeezed gently. They smiled at each other and she replied with
a little pressure from her own hand. They walked along the beach hand in hand, watching the ocean waves roll over the pebbles and talking, laughing, joking.
The war was forgotten.
"What are you doing?" Cecilia cried as Robbie began to push her gently sideways so she almost ended up in the sea. "This!" he laughed, pushing her a little harder. "Excuse me! If I end up going in, I will bring you in with me." Cecilia laughed, trying to act annoyed but failing. Robbie chuckled and raised an eyebrow at her, his eyes sparkling bright blue. "Fine" He replied and very gently
pushed her once more. Cecilia grabbed his hand and ran towards the sea, giggling loudly.
As a wave came towards them they turned and ran a little way back up the shore. "Afraid of getting wet?" Robbie teased. "No, why would I be?" Cecilia replied, smiling at him. "Prove it" Robbie said smiling back. "Fine!" Cecilia said, then turned
and began to slowly walk towards the waves. Cecilia waited until the last moment and turned, running away from them, only to be stopped by Robbie who held her
still as the wave splashed them.
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rorysgirl riedel |
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More! More! More!
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Bluebell66 |
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Ohhhh...
Yes, please, more Sophie!
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Sophz456 |
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Aww thanks guys. I'm adding bits to part three as I write them
Some of you will see parallels to the film here.
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hannah kipje |
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How are you girls able to write at such speed...???
I wish I could do that.. but with me it feels like I have to
pull it out of my toes where it is attached with very strong bungee ropes or something...
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Sophz456 |
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I don't know Hannah, I just get inspired and write and write and write.
I've finished this section of the fanfic, but I've got a special little something which will help you picture the scenes as I did. x
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rorysgirl riedel |
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I have several Doctor Who fanfics going at once right now and I'm amazed that I can keep them straight!
Plus the one for Mister Tumnus.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Sophz456 |
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"I cannot believe you just did that to me!" exclaimed Cecilia. "You said you weren't afraid of getting wet, I was just tested you and I was right. You are!" Robbie joked, leaning forwards and kissing her lightly on the lips. "Typical" Cecilia replied, rolling her eyes. "Again?" Robbie asked. "Let's go!" Cecilia grabbed his hand once more and they ran into towards the waves. Just before the wave hit, Cecilia turned and began to run back up the shore, but Robbie turned and grabbed her waist, pulling her in to face the sea and lifted her off her feet.
"I love you" Cecilia said, turning to face him, emphasising one word. "I love you" Robbie replied, using the same slight emphasis on the second word. They lent forwards and kissed once more. "Let's go and dry off" Robbie
whispered, holding her left hand with one of his, and gently holding her upper arm with the other. He lifted her hand and kissed her shoulder as they walked
towards the cottage.
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hannah kipje |
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Ooooh, LOVE the ani's!
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Bluebell66 |
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Awww...they are the sweetest couple...
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rorysgirl riedel |
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Love the ani and love the chapter! More please!
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Mylan512 |
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WOW Soph!! I'm totally loving your stories. You must be in a creative mood tonight!! Keep them coming!! (but if you have to sleep... I understand)
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